Hmmmm....
Well.... from what I see here, I realize that you use 8-bit characters with a different story. And from reading the other reviews I figured that they are right in some points. Although,I didn't see the Vanilla Sky scene, but all I can say is that you use low detailed characters that doesn't have much face expresions and maybe that what made it not combined well with the story events. But I admire your effort on this work because it is not that bad, so I'll give you a good score.